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RxS smut doujin
by Gone (chiyosuke)
at February 21st, 2005 (04:12 pm)

Yep, My first smut doujin ever XD

Title: Valentine's Trouble
Rating: *cough* R-18+ *cough*
Pairing: Riku/Sota

Comment: This doujin is dedicated to my friend, putain <3, she's really nice to me, I owe her so much because she made me some RxS smut fic *huggles*
Oh yes, before I forgot, I edited this doujin in a really really Rush, so it does look bad ^^;;, and sorry for the messy sketch (yep, I made it in RUSH >_<)
And the lame story , and the ruined panels and the cheesy text plus the grammar >>;;
But I hope you guys like it!

Read it from LEFT to RIGHT


I hope I didn't ruined the LJ-CUT code >>;;, if yes, please tell me *sigh*

X-posted on my LJ chiyosuke

Now onto the doujin! I hope you guys enjoy it, and happy valentine day ^-^




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How do you think? not enough smut?? Want more? *whacked* Im just kidding ^^;;; feel free to critic, and I hope you guys like it!, specially Pet-sama :3

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Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 21st, 2005 09:25 am (UTC)

thank you so much! *huggles* :3

Posted by: Masterless Lucifer (wynden)
Posted at: February 21st, 2005 09:46 am (UTC)
riku - no angel

My actual thoughts while reading this were largely incoherent... something along the lines of good god he's so cute wtf bbq!?!... Which, roughly translated, means it's incredibly awesome! x3 Gorgeous work. I only wish I had that talent. ;)

And actually I thought the ending was very funny. ^^

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 21st, 2005 09:59 am (UTC)

Whoaa... *blushes* i wuv yew, and thank you so much for your comment ^-^ *huggles*

And about the ending, it was just appeared on my mind suddenly ^^;

Posted by: red_rahl (red_rahl)
Posted at: February 21st, 2005 09:52 am (UTC)

Really gorgeous drawing and paneling! I wish I had as much skillz but alas, still learning. I love how you drew Riku and Sora and I love the texture. The highlights are well done and everything is just beautiful. Regardless of how I feel about underage intimacy, this was awesome. ^_^

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 21st, 2005 10:01 am (UTC)

I wish I could be like you, I saw your KH-doujin and I really really love it, dude! ^^
And thank you so much for your comment! I really appreciate it ;~; :: huggles ::

Posted by: christie (moonblader)
Posted at: February 21st, 2005 11:08 am (UTC)

hahahahha!
pooor sora!!! *falls off her chair laughing*
waiii!!!
sugoi!!! hehehe great work chiyosuke! ^____^ lol i was so freaked when my dad passed by. *looks nervously behind her* heh heh.
but *clears throat* that's not de point..... heheheh lol! enough smut for me to last ... a week!! ^_____^
heheheheh man, so jealous.. such a great artist! ^^ ne... keep up the great work! ^_____^

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 21st, 2005 01:30 pm (UTC)

WHoah *SHHHHH* Don't let your dad know it, or im doomed :O
Hehehehe,its a humor and romance so, there's a sweet and there's a funny thing to make you laugh XD XD

Im glad that you like it :3 :: huggles :: Thank you so much!

Posted by: Just me. (ex_coldsilen706)
Posted at: February 21st, 2005 01:20 pm (UTC)

"Keep quiet and be a good boy."

Riku you naughty naughty SEXY naughty boy.

This has definetely made my day. You've drawn them gorgeously and there's just not enough words to express how much I have enjoyed seeing this. :)

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 21st, 2005 01:36 pm (UTC)

Yes, he's so sexy and naughty boy omg *drools*, and I hope I didn't ruin his sexiness or even his naughtyness ;3

Im glad you like it and enjoy it dude! :3 *hugs*

Posted by: Just call me worthless (mycybersuicide)
Posted at: February 21st, 2005 01:57 pm (UTC)

SO CUTE!! OMG!! The ending was perfect. hehehehe.
I wish I could draw like that. ;.; Oh well..
Now I'll have to write a nice Sora, Riku lemon. :3
~looks at the time~ ahhh, I gotta go to school.

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 22nd, 2005 08:20 am (UTC)

Thank you so much ^_^ :: huggles :: yea, you shoulde make the fic >3

Posted by: Rory-Ann Austin (fujifox)
Posted at: February 21st, 2005 03:12 pm (UTC)

*faints*


I am so ENVIOUS! *heart* This is absoluty wonderful. ^_^ I wished i could draw that good while *RUSHED*.

=^-^= I love it!

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 22nd, 2005 08:28 am (UTC)

*blushes* Thank you so much, dude! you're so nice ;~;

Posted by: Arashi (asuras)
Posted at: February 21st, 2005 03:21 pm (UTC)

so pretty ;_;

can i use to make icons? Will credit you of course :3

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 22nd, 2005 08:29 am (UTC)

Aww, thank you so much ;~; *huggles*

Sure ^^, i appreciate it :3

Posted by: Angelica / Yuuka (kame_pie)
Posted at: February 21st, 2005 04:49 pm (UTC)
Utena x Anthy. Credit to nekochancutecat

The last panels made me fall off my chair. XDD; I say that's a great way of ending the doujin.

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 22nd, 2005 08:30 am (UTC)

;_;, Thank you so much *huggles*

Posted by: Hannah (hannie3000)
Posted at: February 21st, 2005 05:04 pm (UTC)

omg that was so pretty '.'
hehe...the ending was too funny..
don't mind the spelling, it doesn't really matter that much
*evil cackle*
uhh... XD;; sorry

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 22nd, 2005 08:32 am (UTC)

Ehehehe *giggles* Thank you so much dude!

Posted by: Omi (omiansatsusha)
Posted at: February 21st, 2005 05:16 pm (UTC)
Tactics Gay Hint

I can't really find goot words. But. You're my hero. ToT; I love your style, and the fact that its so...doujin-y. (Aren't my choice of words great?)

Luff luff~ I definitely vote for more. >.> <3

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 22nd, 2005 08:35 am (UTC)

Then you're my saviour ;3
Hehehe, thank you so much, don't worry, I'll make another smut doujin ^_~

Posted by: no name (starwhirl)
Posted at: February 21st, 2005 06:40 pm (UTC)

::giggling while drooling:: My, the ending had me laughing so hard...thank god I'm home alone O.o...then my parents would be all like "What are you laughing at?"

Anyway, it was cute *paw* I like it :-)

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 22nd, 2005 08:36 am (UTC)

I just love humor *giggles* Thank you so much dude! you're so nice ;~;

Posted by: Yurameki (yurameki_tenshi)
Posted at: February 21st, 2005 07:21 pm (UTC)
Dirteh Thoughts

^___^ I REALLY loved your doujin! I thought it was drawn beautifully! But, for some reason it seemed as if Riku was like..trying to rape Sora O.o;; I'm not trying to be ofending or anything, and the ending was hillarious as hell ^^;

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 22nd, 2005 08:39 am (UTC)

Oh yes, he *cough* IS *cough* raping Sora :3
Thank you so much! ^_^ :: huggles ::

Posted by: Megs (seleraleonhart)
Posted at: February 21st, 2005 07:34 pm (UTC)

Ee, Riku's so naughty!! Bad boy. And Sora's adorable as always. I heart your doujinshi. ^____^ Make moooore. Mooooore... *waves her hands around*

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 22nd, 2005 08:41 am (UTC)

Thank you so much, dude! *I love bad naughty boy Riku and adorable sora* x3

Don't worry, I'll make another one, either it's smut or not x3

Posted by: Megs (seleraleonhart)
Posted at: February 22nd, 2005 09:33 pm (UTC)

Posted by: Angel (rikuxsora)
Posted at: February 21st, 2005 07:47 pm (UTC)
@_______@....

O.M.F.G. OOOOMMFFFGG. xD I LOVED THIS THING, OMG! -=fangirl squeel=- YOU TOTALLY NEED TO DO MORE.

....FOR ME. xD; I don't care if you don't know me! I'll...be eternally greatful? Honestly, <3333333. @_@

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 22nd, 2005 08:44 am (UTC)
Re: @_______@....

Omigosh, a riku/sora fellow fangirl fan @_@ *me squeeling too* *bounce bounce*
Thank you very much T^T :: hugs ::

I'll make more, don't worry >D

Posted by: LQ (lq)
Posted at: February 21st, 2005 09:11 pm (UTC)

LOLOLOL!!! Loading this page almost killed my computer but it was SOOOOOO worth it! Oh man that ending was PERFECT!!! The whole DJ was so adorable and sweet, and the smut...@_@ mmmmm...but that ending. Any other ending wouldn't have fit. Great balance of humor, sap and smut.

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 22nd, 2005 08:46 am (UTC)

Sorry for the huge image and slow loading T.T;;
Thank you so much, dude~! ^^ :: huggles :: *although this is my first time making a smut doujin* :3

Posted by: Kariberry (charmless)
Posted at: February 21st, 2005 10:28 pm (UTC)

I love. <3 You can do positions and facial expressions really well. ^^

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 22nd, 2005 08:48 am (UTC)

Thank you so much~! :: huggles :: Im glad that you like it ^^

Posted by: cybersnowwhite (keiyosu_chan)
Posted at: February 22nd, 2005 11:02 am (UTC)

*blinks, blushes and dies of nosebleed* OMIGOD that is so awesome! The smut! You draw Sora so cutely!

I love this!

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 22nd, 2005 01:42 pm (UTC)

Uwah, thank you very much! Im glad that you like it(or love it? XD) ^_^!

Posted by: CHAUSSETTES ♆ (putain)
Posted at: February 22nd, 2005 12:51 pm (UTC)
:3


I'm sorry.. I just have to comment again because I just love this too FUCKING much.. X3333

OMG I still can't believe that you made a doujin for me.. ;__; *sniffles* Nobody's ever been so nice to me before! *glomps you tightly*

hehe as you may know already, I have printed it out already and I'm carrying it around everywhere.. >D

X33333 THANKS AGAIN HUN! I LOVE YOUUU! *tackle glomps*
I'll try to write your SxR fic asap, k? X3


~Pet X333333

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 22nd, 2005 01:46 pm (UTC)
Re: :3

Aiii~~~ Pet-chama~~~ :: huggles :: I wuv wuv you XD, thank you so much for making me so much fic ^_^, and perverted Ideas XD
Hehehehe :: glomps you tightly :: Im glad that you like it ^_^

Posted by: Nobody... (__albel_nox__)
Posted at: February 22nd, 2005 06:51 pm (UTC)

*drools* ... ... .. you have really good art~!~!~! riku was drawn very well ^.^ as well as sora... i thought the ending was funny ^.^

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 23rd, 2005 11:46 am (UTC)

hehehe, Thank you so much! I appreciate it ^.^

Posted by: دانيل (galaxian)
Posted at: February 22nd, 2005 10:08 pm (UTC)

Every time I see your doujin, I squeal. It's put together very well! The consistant color and appearance of each panel gave it a great flow. >D The ending = ♥

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 23rd, 2005 12:00 pm (UTC)

You're so nice dud ;~;
Thank you so much! I appreciate it >_

Posted by: April (selphiebooyaka)
Posted at: February 23rd, 2005 02:05 am (UTC)
*Kiss the dark*

I. Love. It. o_o!
the ending made me laugh SO hard! your'e my flippin' hero. I swear chiyo XP

I look forward to more of your pictures :O you're art's GORGEOUS.

Also hoping for more doujinshis *hint hint*

Keep up the EXCELLENT work! :D

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 25th, 2005 08:08 am (UTC)

*whacks myself for not noticing your comment*

Dude! Thank you sooo much for your comment! And Im glad that you love it *^^*

Don't worry, I'll make another XD

Posted by: RAWR!!! (shuichi_hiroshi)
Posted at: February 23rd, 2005 06:02 am (UTC)

Mooooooooooooooooore!!! I was really enjoying it and your art so rules!! I love it!!! PLEASE MORE!! :D

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 24th, 2005 08:26 am (UTC)

Heheh, don't worry, there'll be more ^-^
Thank you so much dude x3

Posted by: Ember (_moenokori)
Posted at: February 23rd, 2005 06:18 am (UTC)
a/c (gundam seed)

GOSH I'm jealous. What a beautiful doujinshi!! You have a wonderful style! And...don't worry about the spelling. I'm pretty sure nobody was looking at it for that. ;D

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 24th, 2005 08:31 am (UTC)

*sniffles* guess im still bad at the spelling ;~;
But thank you so much! :D

Posted by: Nisa (bananatart)
Posted at: February 24th, 2005 06:59 am (UTC)

Guh... *fangirls* Can I take you home with me? . Just kidding.

That was really good. Not too "pr0nish", just right. My mother liked it too XD

Posted by: Gone (chiyosuke)
Posted at: February 24th, 2005 08:34 am (UTC)

Take me to your home ~ X3
Mwah, your emoticon is so cute! :3
Thank you so much, dude! (whoa... your mom?? O_o)

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