Yep, My first smut doujin ever XDTitle: Valentine's TroubleRating: *cough* R-18+ *cough*Pairing: Riku/SotaComment: This doujin is dedicated to my friend, putain <3, she's really nice to me, I owe her so much because she made me some RxS smut fic *huggles*Oh yes, before I forgot, I edited this doujin in a really really Rush, so it does look bad ^^;;, and sorry for the messy sketch (yep, I made it in RUSH >_<)And the lame story , and the ruined panels and the cheesy text plus the grammar >>;;But I hope you guys like it! Read it from LEFT to RIGHTI hope I didn't ruined the LJ-CUT code >>;;, if yes, please tell me *sigh*X-posted on my LJ chiyosukeNow onto the doujin! I hope you guys enjoy it, and happy valentine day ^-^How do you think? not enough smut?? Want more? *whacked* Im just kidding ^^;;; feel free to critic, and I hope you guys like it!, specially Pet-sama :3
thank you so much! *huggles* :3
My actual thoughts while reading this were largely incoherent... something along the lines of good god he's so cute wtf bbq!?!... Which, roughly translated, means it's incredibly awesome! x3 Gorgeous work. I only wish I had that talent. ;)And actually I thought the ending was very funny. ^^
Whoaa... *blushes* i wuv yew, and thank you so much for your comment ^-^ *huggles*And about the ending, it was just appeared on my mind suddenly ^^;
Really gorgeous drawing and paneling! I wish I had as much skillz but alas, still learning. I love how you drew Riku and Sora and I love the texture. The highlights are well done and everything is just beautiful. Regardless of how I feel about underage intimacy, this was awesome. ^_^
I wish I could be like you, I saw your KH-doujin and I really really love it, dude! ^^And thank you so much for your comment! I really appreciate it ;~; :: huggles ::
hahahahha!pooor sora!!! *falls off her chair laughing*waiii!!!sugoi!!! hehehe great work chiyosuke! ^____^ lol i was so freaked when my dad passed by. *looks nervously behind her* heh heh.but *clears throat* that's not de point..... heheheh lol! enough smut for me to last ... a week!! ^_____^heheheheh man, so jealous.. such a great artist! ^^ ne... keep up the great work! ^_____^
WHoah *SHHHHH* Don't let your dad know it, or im doomed :OHehehehe,its a humor and romance so, there's a sweet and there's a funny thing to make you laugh XD XDIm glad that you like it :3 :: huggles :: Thank you so much!
"Keep quiet and be a good boy."Riku you naughty naughty SEXY naughty boy.This has definetely made my day. You've drawn them gorgeously and there's just not enough words to express how much I have enjoyed seeing this. :)
Yes, he's so sexy and naughty boy omg *drools*, and I hope I didn't ruin his sexiness or even his naughtyness ;3Im glad you like it and enjoy it dude! :3 *hugs*
SO CUTE!! OMG!! The ending was perfect. hehehehe.I wish I could draw like that. ;.; Oh well..Now I'll have to write a nice Sora, Riku lemon. :3~looks at the time~ ahhh, I gotta go to school.
Thank you so much ^_^ :: huggles :: yea, you shoulde make the fic >3
*faints*I am so ENVIOUS! *heart* This is absoluty wonderful. ^_^ I wished i could draw that good while *RUSHED*.=^-^= I love it!
*blushes* Thank you so much, dude! you're so nice ;~;
so pretty ;_;can i use to make icons? Will credit you of course :3
Aww, thank you so much ;~; *huggles*Sure ^^, i appreciate it :3
The last panels made me fall off my chair. XDD; I say that's a great way of ending the doujin.
;_;, Thank you so much *huggles*
omg that was so pretty '.' hehe...the ending was too funny..don't mind the spelling, it doesn't really matter that much*evil cackle*uhh... XD;; sorry
Ehehehe *giggles* Thank you so much dude!
I can't really find goot words. But. You're my hero. ToT; I love your style, and the fact that its so...doujin-y. (Aren't my choice of words great?)Luff luff~ I definitely vote for more. >.> <3
Then you're my saviour ;3Hehehe, thank you so much, don't worry, I'll make another smut doujin ^_~
::giggling while drooling:: My, the ending had me laughing so hard...thank god I'm home alone O.o...then my parents would be all like "What are you laughing at?" Anyway, it was cute *paw* I like it :-)
I just love humor *giggles* Thank you so much dude! you're so nice ;~;
^___^ I REALLY loved your doujin! I thought it was drawn beautifully! But, for some reason it seemed as if Riku was like..trying to rape Sora O.o;; I'm not trying to be ofending or anything, and the ending was hillarious as hell ^^;
Oh yes, he *cough* IS *cough* raping Sora :3Thank you so much! ^_^ :: huggles ::
Ee, Riku's so naughty!! Bad boy. And Sora's adorable as always. I heart your doujinshi. ^____^ Make moooore. Mooooore... *waves her hands around*
Thank you so much, dude! *I love bad naughty boy Riku and adorable sora* x3Don't worry, I'll make another one, either it's smut or not x3
O.M.F.G. OOOOMMFFFGG. xD I LOVED THIS THING, OMG! -=fangirl squeel=- YOU TOTALLY NEED TO DO MORE.....FOR ME. xD; I don't care if you don't know me! I'll...be eternally greatful? Honestly, <3333333. @_@
Omigosh, a riku/sora fellow fangirl fan @_@ *me squeeling too* *bounce bounce*Thank you very much T^T :: hugs ::I'll make more, don't worry >D
LOLOLOL!!! Loading this page almost killed my computer but it was SOOOOOO worth it! Oh man that ending was PERFECT!!! The whole DJ was so adorable and sweet, and the smut...@_@ mmmmm...but that ending. Any other ending wouldn't have fit. Great balance of humor, sap and smut.
Sorry for the huge image and slow loading T.T;;Thank you so much, dude~! ^^ :: huggles :: *although this is my first time making a smut doujin* :3
I love. <3 You can do positions and facial expressions really well. ^^
Thank you so much~! :: huggles :: Im glad that you like it ^^
*blinks, blushes and dies of nosebleed* OMIGOD that is so awesome! The smut! You draw Sora so cutely!I love this!
Uwah, thank you very much! Im glad that you like it(or love it? XD) ^_^!
I'm sorry.. I just have to comment again because I just love this too FUCKING much.. X3333OMG I still can't believe that you made a doujin for me.. ;__; *sniffles* Nobody's ever been so nice to me before! *glomps you tightly*hehe as you may know already, I have printed it out already and I'm carrying it around everywhere.. >DX33333 THANKS AGAIN HUN! I LOVE YOUUU! *tackle glomps*I'll try to write your SxR fic asap, k? X3 ~Pet X333333
Aiii~~~ Pet-chama~~~ :: huggles :: I wuv wuv you XD, thank you so much for making me so much fic ^_^, and perverted Ideas XDHehehehe :: glomps you tightly :: Im glad that you like it ^_^
*drools* ... ... .. you have really good art~!~!~! riku was drawn very well ^.^ as well as sora... i thought the ending was funny ^.^
hehehe, Thank you so much! I appreciate it ^.^
Every time I see your doujin, I squeal. It's put together very well! The consistant color and appearance of each panel gave it a great flow. >D The ending = ♥
You're so nice dud ;~;Thank you so much! I appreciate it >_
I. Love. It. o_o! the ending made me laugh SO hard! your'e my flippin' hero. I swear chiyo XPI look forward to more of your pictures :O you're art's GORGEOUS.Also hoping for more doujinshis *hint hint* Keep up the EXCELLENT work! :D
*whacks myself for not noticing your comment*Dude! Thank you sooo much for your comment! And Im glad that you love it *^^*Don't worry, I'll make another XD
Mooooooooooooooooore!!! I was really enjoying it and your art so rules!! I love it!!! PLEASE MORE!! :D
Heheh, don't worry, there'll be more ^-^Thank you so much dude x3
GOSH I'm jealous. What a beautiful doujinshi!! You have a wonderful style! And...don't worry about the spelling. I'm pretty sure nobody was looking at it for that. ;D
*sniffles* guess im still bad at the spelling ;~;But thank you so much! :D
Guh... *fangirls* Can I take you home with me? . Just kidding. That was really good. Not too "pr0nish", just right. My mother liked it too XD
Take me to your home ~ X3Mwah, your emoticon is so cute! :3Thank you so much, dude! (whoa... your mom?? O_o)